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Every part of me wants him.
Body and Soul
ache for the unattainable.
His soft golden hair whispers
"caress me".
His deep blue eyes implore
"trust me".
I long for his touch.
Being near him, without being with him
is unbearable.
One day
I will roll over and see his smile,
blissfully content as mine.
It may not be love, but it sure as hell feels like what the movies say it is. :pride:

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ShadowsGirl9 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*twitches excitedly* Gold hair and blue eyes..? Describes my crush perfectly ^////^
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CameronFedora Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Student General Artist
:heart: This speaks to me... however I am a girl.
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Change the pronoun :)
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CameronFedora Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Student General Artist
:)
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musicman216 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I just want to say that I love this, and I know these feelings myself. I just wish I had a guy that I could feel this way for now. Very emotional and well done. Good job :)
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you!
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musicman216 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome :)
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Mishka069 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011
Truer words have never been spoken, I have been with my guy for 17 yrs and it doesn't stop, the love just grows and gets stronger and stronger and yes incase you were wondering he stills smiles at me and I smile back for he lights my world ;-)
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Student General Artist
:) So sweet !
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NuSunt Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
soft golden hair indeed :thumbsup:
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SHOrTwiRED Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Student General Artist
AWWW!
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Kayak-g Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
LOVE it!! I usually don't read literature or poetry that much but this is very beautiful and the description is just like the icing on top of the cake. Fantastic work :D
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! That means a lot to me. :)
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kingsalip Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
very beautiful indeed :) he sounds like a handsome chap ;)
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2011  Student General Artist
Sure is. :)I put pictures of him up here [link]
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RisetoFall Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011
That is a really sweet poem. I really like it :)
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Student General Artist
Why, thank you. :)
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RisetoFall Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011
You're welcome. :)
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andgreenmyo-os Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2011
This poem is absolutely gorgeous. I love it.
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:iconsuburbancliche:
suburbancliche Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank You! That makes me happy :)
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:iconsully-chan:
sully-chan Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
this is so sweet! it made my day!
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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Akudama Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011
thats so sweet~! it made me happy just to read it, thank you~
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student General Artist
O gosh. Thank you!
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Akudama Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011
^.^ im serious though it made my day
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Lol, i'm glad!
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Akudama Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011
^^
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
ı am feeling so happy that ı read that poem...
I have to say that the poet is so lcuky because he truely felt what the real love is...hope he can keep on to care about him. and kepps on trying to make this feeling alive...Because love needs efforting continioously :nod:
thanks for sharing :D
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student General Artist
O my, all of your comments are to thoughtful and in depth. Thank you!
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Good things must be supported... If soembody van announce that he loved a boy them we must show him our regrets... Hugs from me dear friend :D
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Student General Artist
T.T Thank you for your support. I can only pray that the others in my life can be supporting as well. Hug accepted!
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:pray:
:nod:
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Desuke-Love Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student Writer
Awwwwww! I nearly cried! This is so beautiful! I do hope it can be that way for you one day xxx
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student General Artist
You actually made me cry! Thank you So much!
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Desuke-Love Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student Writer
Aww I'm sorry! And you're very welcome xxx
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Don't be, it meant a lot to me.
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Desuke-Love Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student Writer
^^ :hug:
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Cesar-sama Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011
This poem is unbelievably sweet.
Great job!! :D
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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frogfrosch23 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011
I am certainly not a fan of poems, but I really like this one! :)
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Glad I'm an exception. Thank You!
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MandyMullins2 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011
Ohh this is so sweet! Is this about the guy in the picture? :love:
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student General Artist
They always are. :)
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MandyMullins2 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011
:giggle:
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Masahiro-Kato Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student Writer
oh wow, that is.....so...EMOTIONAL. I teared up, almost. Amazing wording. That's one of my favourites on dA and in me. WOW. Love it, man.

So is this true? You do?
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! Idk, I would do anything for him, anything to make him happy, i get excited when i get a text with his name on it, after hanging out with him I can't help but sing. :) Like I said in the description, it sure as hell feels like what the movies say it is.
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Masahiro-Kato Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student Writer
np again :)

wow, thats amazing to feel that way. I wish i can feel like that towards someone, but i know i will!

good luck!

dont judge, but.... i can slighty relate cause i think i might be...../bi/

sorry ^^; but good luck
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Why on earth would I judge??? I am in the same boat, because this is the first boy i have ever had feelings for and it's completely new to me. idk if i'm gay, but i do know how i feel about him.
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Masahiro-Kato Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student Writer
alright!!! then we can talk about that topic and our situations with it comfortably?
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suburbancliche Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Of course!
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